19 Aralık 2010 Pazar

LEAVING HOMETOWN DUE TO THE UNEMPLOYMENT

Is there any solution than going to another city? People in my hometown started to be in search of good quality of life standarts, needs started to be inadeque for them with the developing technology and with the increasing of needs. Unemployment is the biggest problem . there three basic causes of unemployment.

Firstly, my hometown is a rural area. Formerly people used to make money from agriculture and livestock. Almost every family had their own animals which are small scatt and big scatt . Additionally, they had their own field to farm. Farming was very common at those times ;but, agriculture and livestock lost its effectiveness dy by day winth whe developing technology in big cities. People got become making less money from it. İncome from agriculture and livestock decreased and so people started to go another city to live in a better condition by finding good works than staying in their hometowns.

The other main cause is factories. There are three factories near my hometown; but, they aren’t as they were in the past. They fired lots of worker from my hometown and from the other villages when they were first opened. However, they got become not doing work, they got become not buying goods to export with the economical chrisis and because of these reasons they laid off the workers. People stayed in a bad stiuation. Some of them went another city while some of them were staying in their hometown.

Finally, the last important cause is that some tradesmen closed their work places because of economical factor and because of not doing money from their works. Many young people were out of work because closed work places. They were the main possibility of work , so being closed of them effected people,too much. It leaded people to leave their hometown like the other causes.

Consequently, people had to leave their hometown. Some of them experienced difficult days because of being in a different city; but, some of them are very pleased with their conditions. However, government can support the villager much more, businessmen can realize investments for residents who live in small areas. Something can be done to develop these areas’ conditions.

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  1. Hi:)
    I think your organization is good.You have explained in detail.There are some writting mistakes such as'whe'.

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  2. hi merve
    your organization is well. you have explained your topic in detail. there are some gramatical mistakes but ı liked it :)

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  3. hi merve:)
    I like your essay, but there are some grammatical mistakes.If you correct them, it will be very good.

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